Great :D
Madness day has open up to a lot of template animations for people who cant draw or animate or script, not you though, clearly, you can draw, you can animate.
It was smooth, somewhat epic and entertaining over all. Since you did so many things right, I'm going to be picky.
The story was slightly hard to follow, and some of your stretch animation, well, I find it unrealistic, stretch animation is too zany for my liking, especially in a submission like this at least.
That's all I can think you did wrong. So, Good work!