Not bad
Animation was very smooth, you know what your doing, the issue is it was far too short, you could have done a lot more.
I hope you submit something bigger and longer soon.
Not bad
Animation was very smooth, you know what your doing, the issue is it was far too short, you could have done a lot more.
I hope you submit something bigger and longer soon.
quite clever
The drawign skills were pretty cool, but you might consider adding subtitles. Good message.
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Look. I was actually really looking forward to watching this 8mb trailor for a mmo halo in flash... I was very dissapointed.
you have to practice using layers in your screen shot editing, generally under a shield is the rest of the hunter.
you do realise the movie itself, without the music, is about 100kb... you just wasted 8mb of my life.
Do you have the slightest clue as to how you are going to make this game work? let alone online? I mean, this trailor shows off nothing.
The idea's great, it'd be nice if it works... but frankly this movie shows us you havent the slightest idea of how you'll go abut doing it.
I wasted 8MB of your life? So now life is measured in MB? Wow! I didn't know that! Besides, this is trailer numero 1 my friend... 2dn of all, I did it quick because I told someone about it and I found out that that someone stals movies from people so I rushed trough it so that he can't steal it and if he does he will get flagged
Good but hard to understand.
I enjoyed it even though I wasn't really sure what was going on.
I love your style, one thing though, don't be so close to the mic, my ears!
Very good.
lol, I liked it, very well drawn, good job, etc. etc.
I dissagree with the last review, you don't need blood 'n' gore to make a good short, or any movie for that matter. good work. the only issue I had was predictability. but heh, it's a short so I don't care, it was very well done. A+
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lets see here... mate, you're a good animator, but 3 days got that? put some effort in please, if you do I'm sure you'll see a big difference in your reviews.
just make a longer flash then come back, don't give up, I see good things for you.
I didn't BLAM it, so you did good.
Pretty good, nice and smooth animation, I recognised your mimiced layout, The music was good, sounds where good.
Here it comes!
TOO SHORT! can you say "abrupt ending"? you're a good animator by what I've seen here, don't dissapoint your viewers, make it longer next time. keep up the good work.
Random is good! nods
I like random clips, it was a good kind of pointless.
I haven't got anything to complain about really... and I'm on a complaint marathon today... cudos... how ever you spell that...
I'm going to guess I'd have an abusive review to flag if I made a Clock movie this time?
It's good that you enjoyed it though and you should check out ZombiePanda's animation for more of this good kind of pointless.
Good up until the end.
I think, personally, if you make a trailor, release it on a personal site or release it on NG with the finished episode #1.
your sprite-mation isn't bad, I was gonna 8 you on your graphics up until the end... 1. Don't mix paint brush with sprite unless you can brush like MSpaint or like some godly pro2006 flash'er. 2. Shape tween is out man, yuk... Don't be lazy, make your own special effects... 3. credits where very stiff... very... a scrolling credit is much more enticing than a still credit.
Past all that, you did your job i supose, I'm intrigued as to what you'll make.
Hey, thnx 4 the advice. Finally someone who will tell the good and bad then just the bad. :)
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